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4．假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的英文信息提示，選一份你喜歡的工作并寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的求職信．信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾格式已給出．
Write a letter asking about one of the jobs below．
（1）TELEPHONE SALES PERSON wanted．
Must be fluent in English and one other language．
Eight-hour day，good pay．Tel：0208-674-3242
（2）MAJOR CATERING COMPANY has temporary jobs as chefs，waiters，and kitchen staff．
For more information write to Ms Kate Rees，17Park End St．
（3）MODELS wanted over t．he summer．I'm looking for a number of models to work both in the studio and on location：If you're thinking about a career as a model，or actress，this might be a good chance to get some good shots．Email：jonathan@modelsearch．com．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文提示描述了三個(gè)崗位，分別是電話銷售員，廚師或服務(wù)生，模特或藝術(shù)家．要求考生選擇自己感興趣的職位寫(xiě)一封求職信．注意信的格式正確，以及使用第一，第二人稱．
重要短語(yǔ)：
in regard to，關(guān)于，high standards of，高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的，roll-up-your-sleeves work ethic，挽起袖子埋頭苦干，
高分句子：
and I would welcome the chance for an interview which is to discuss your needs and outline my strengths in person．本句中含有which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾interview．

解答 Dear Ms Kate Rees：
    In regard to the open cook position you have posted on Monster，I am very interested in the opportunity．Perhaps after reading this letter and enclosed resume，you will agree we have a mutually beneficial reason to meet．（表明求職目的）
    My credentials include：12 years of cooking experience in a hotel setting； A track record of increasing clientele by preparing top-quality meals and maintaining high standards of excellence：Respected leadership skills with experience training and motivating kitchen staff to work together as a team．And expertise in menu planning and food/supplies ordering．（描述自己特長(zhǎng)資歷）
   As a cook for major catering company，I maintained an excellent performance record and earned a reputation for dedication，teamwork and a roll-up-your-sleeves work ethic．
   The cook position sounds like an outstanding opportunity，and I would welcome the chance for an interview which is to discuss your needs and outline my strengths in person．（高分句型） You may reach me at 718-555-1212． Thank you for your time and consideration of my resume，and I look forward to speaking with you．（留下自己聯(lián)系方式和祝愿）
Sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在完成作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，