【題目】短文改錯

短文中共有l(wèi)0處語言錯誤，每行中最多兩處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫出增加的詞；

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉；

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線：并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Mike was one of my father’s younger brother. He has been died of cancer for two years. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

【答案】

Mike was one of my father's younger . He has been of cancer for two years. When I was a teenager, he taught how to hunt in the woods the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then on to one of his hunting destinations. Just dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, I learned to be brave and through the experience.

【1】brother改成brothers

【2】died改成dead

【3】us改為me

【4】used改成using

【5】in后加a

【6】travel改為travelled

【7】after改為before

【8】and改為or

【9】去掉but

【10】patiently改為patient

【解析】

試題分析：這篇文章主要描述了作者在小時候根據(jù)叔叔打獵，從而學(xué)會了勇敢和有耐心。

【1】brother改成brothers 考查名詞。根據(jù)前文的one of判斷此處應(yīng)用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故brother改成brothers。

【2】died改成dead 考查形容詞。Die非延續(xù)性動詞，不可以與for two years連用，be dead表示狀態(tài)，可與成段的時間狀語連用。故died改成dead

【3】us改為me 考查代詞。根據(jù)前文只提到作者自己，應(yīng)是me。故us改為me。

【4】used改成using 考查非謂語動詞。句意：我是少年的時候，他教給我如何在森林里利用黃昏之前的幾個小時打獵。此處是using作方式狀語。故used改成using。

【5】in后加a 考查冠詞。此處的restaurant是第一次出現(xiàn)，并且此處表示“一家飯店”，故in后加a。

【6】travel改為travelled 考查動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)前文的left，stayed判斷，此處travelled應(yīng)是與它們并列，并列的謂語動詞應(yīng)在時態(tài)上保持一致。故travel改為travelled。

【7】after改為before 考查介詞，根據(jù)上下文應(yīng)該是在黃昏之前找到合適的地方，故after改為before。

【8】and改為or 考查連詞。根據(jù)and前后的選擇關(guān)系判斷，故and改為or。

【9】去掉but 根據(jù)前文的though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，主句和從句之間不可有連詞連接，故去掉but。

【10】patiently改為patient 考查形容詞。根據(jù)前文的be brave判斷此處應(yīng)用形容詞形式作表語，故 patiently改為patient。

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