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2．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國朋友Tom要來你校任教．為了方便，他打算在學(xué)校附近租房子，發(fā)來郵件向你咨詢合適的房源． 請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息回復(fù)郵件．

房子地點：龍灣大街 面積布局：2樓，一室，一廳，70m2，朝南．家具齊全． 環(huán)境交通：小區(qū)優(yōu)美、安靜；附近有體育館可以健身；購物、交通便利． 每月房租：4500元 聯(lián)系電話：15198269512

注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100．
          2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
          3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
          參考詞匯：公寓   apartment
Dear Tom，
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I am writing to tell you that I've found an apartment which may meet your needs．
我寫信是為了告訴你我已經(jīng)找到了一處能令你滿意的公寓．
高分句型二：
If you are interested in it，please call 15198269512．如果你有興趣的話，請撥打15198269512．
句型一 which may meet your needs．該句是一個which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，which在句中充當(dāng)主語，替代前面的先行詞apartment．
句型二 If you are interested in it…該句是一個由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，從句的謂語部分使用了一個重要的固定短語 be interested in..對…感興趣

解答 Dear Tom，
    I am writing to tell you that I've found an apartment which may meet your needs．（高分句型一）（寫作目的）It's on the second floor，facing the south，with an area of 70 square meters．It has a bedroom and a sitting room，fully furnished．Located in Longwan Street，it offers convenient shopping and easy traffic．The apartment is in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood．And there is also a gym nearby where you can go and take exercise regularly．（房況說明）The rent is 4，500 yuan per month．If you are interested in it，please call 15198269512．（高分句型二）If you need any more help，just let me know．
Looking forward to meeting you soon．
 
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 本書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類書面表達(dá)一般給考生規(guī)定了寫作要點，寫作時應(yīng)緊密聯(lián)系所給提示，用準(zhǔn)確的語言表達(dá)清楚，簡潔明了．