分析 高分句型:
句型一:
Having had (1)a heated discussion,we agreed on (2)making a video to record our experiences at school.經(jīng)過熱烈的討論,我們一致同意制作視頻記錄我們在學(xué)校的經(jīng)歷.
(1)having had 現(xiàn)在分詞完成式做時(shí)間狀語,相當(dāng)于after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句;分詞做狀語是書面表達(dá)的亮點(diǎn)句型.
(2)agree on 取得一致意見.
句型二:
Material collecting took us a whole week,during which (1)we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life(2).收集材料花費(fèi)了我們整整一個(gè)星期;在此期間我們采訪了老師,拍攝了我們學(xué)校生活的每一方面.
(1)during which 在此期間,which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,which指代上文的a whole week,非限制性定語從句是書面表達(dá)中常用的高分句型.
(2)every aspect of school life學(xué)校生活的每一方面
句型三:
We debated over (1)what to put into(2)the video.我們就把什么材料放進(jìn)視頻進(jìn)行辯論.
(1)debate over 就…進(jìn)行辯論.
(2)what to put into the video為"疑問詞+to do"相當(dāng)于一個(gè)名詞性從句,本句中相當(dāng)于一個(gè)賓語從句;書面表達(dá)中運(yùn)用"疑問詞+to do"會(huì)使得表達(dá)簡練.
解答 Graduation finally came.My classmates and I decided to do something.Having had a heated discussion,we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school【高分句型一】(圖片一:決定制作視頻).
Material collecting took us a whole week,during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life【高分句型二】(圖片2:收集視頻材料).The editing part after that was tough.We debated over what to put into the video【高分句型三】.Some compromises were unavoidable,but the video turned out perfect.(圖片3:視頻取舍和制作) Several days later,when the video was played on the graduation ceremony,it was well received(圖片4:視頻展示).The students and teachers shared a great time,which surely gave us a great sense of achievement(結(jié)論).
點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)首先審題要到位:審體裁、人稱和時(shí)態(tài);審要點(diǎn).其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用,從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級(jí)句型;詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢;再次,運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's more、moreover、for one thing …for another等,使文字更加流暢.
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