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【題目】假定你是李華，當(dāng)前在倫敦的孔子學(xué)院（Confucius Institute）做志愿者。你的英國朋友Henry對(duì)孔子特別感興趣，請(qǐng)你寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參觀孔子學(xué)院，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.簡述孔子及中國文化在世界上的影響；

2.告知參觀時(shí)間：11月6日（本周六）上午8點(diǎn)；

3.介紹參加活動(dòng)：漢語班, 剪紙, 書法。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯: 剪紙：paper-cutting

書法：calligraphy

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

I am glad to know that you are keen on Confucius and Chinese culture. Confucius, whose ideas have a great impact on Chinese culture, is considered the greatest ancient educator. As an increasing number of foreigners want to learn Chinese culture, the Confucius Institutes are set up in many foreign countries.

Since I am a volunteer working in the Confucius Institute in London, I’d like to invite you to visit it at 8:00 am on Saturday, November 6.

During our visit, we can attend some Chinese classes, which will be followed by some activities such as paper-cutting and Chinese calligraphy.

I sincerely hope that you will accept this invitation. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】本文書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一篇電子郵件：當(dāng)前在倫敦的孔子學(xué)院（Confucius Institute）做志愿者。你的英國朋友Henry對(duì)孔子特別感興趣，請(qǐng)你寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參觀孔子學(xué)院，要點(diǎn)如下：簡述孔子及中國文化在世界上的影響；告知參觀時(shí)間：11月6日（本周六）上午8點(diǎn)；介紹參加活動(dòng)：漢語班, 剪紙, 書法。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：Confucius Institute（孔子學(xué)院）；have a great impact on Chinese culture（對(duì)中國文化有一個(gè)大的影響）；in many foreign countries（在很多外國國家）；paper-cutting and Chinese calligraphy（剪紙和中國書法）

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)問題。本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱，現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一封電子郵件，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。I am glad to know that you are keen on Confucius and Chinese culture.文中使用that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；Confucius, whose ideas have a great impact on Chinese culture, is considered the greatest ancient educator.句中whose引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；Since I am a volunteer working in the Confucius Institute in London,文中使用since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；During our visit, we can attend some Chinese classes, which will be followed by some activities such as paper-cutting and Chinese calligraphy.句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。