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5．World No.2 tennis player Jelena first practised tennis when she was 9 years old．After six months．she played her first match，which was the national championship for kids up to 10 years old．She came to the semi-finals．When she was 11，she won a national championship for girls up to 12 years old．
To continue her career，she left her motherland and went to the United States．At that time，she couldn't speak any English，and she was alone，so it was a hard lime．
However，it was a good learning experience for Jelena．"I did not know what to do at first．Then I tried to do everything on my own．When you arc in difficulty it makes you more independent and stronger．"
and development of her on the tennis court ever  Jelena said when asked In the US．Jelena received better conditions for practice game．Soon，she became a professional and has been shining since，"Your future depends on many things but mostly on you，"about her secret of success．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
（1）用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；
（2）用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對"Your future depends on yourself"的看法，并用2〜3 個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支樣你的看法．
【寫作要求】
（1）寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
（2）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
（3）不必寫標(biāo)題．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
It describes the terrible difficulties she overcame by herself．which have made Jelena an independent，strong and successful player
它描述了她克服了的可怕的困難，這使Jelena變成一個(gè)獨(dú)立的，強(qiáng)大的和成功的球員．
高分句型二：
It's true that our future is determined by many things，such as opportunities and help from others，but our own attitude，determination，and hard work play a more important role-In other words，we are the mailer of our own fulure．
這是真的，我們的未來取決于很多事情，比如機(jī)會和別人的幫助，但是我們自己的態(tài)度、決心和努力工作，換句話說，扮演更重要的角色的是我們自己未來的郵件．

解答 One possibk version：
The story narrates the world-famous tennis player Jelena's way to success．It describes the terrible difficulties she overcame by herself．which have made Jelena an independent，strong and successful player（高分句型一），
    I can't agree more with her view about the secret of success-Your future depends on many things but mostly on you．It's true that our future is determined by many things，such as opportunities and help from others，but our own attitude，determination，and hard work play a more important role-In other words，we are the mailer of our own fulure（高分句型二）．
    As for my dream．I want to become a nurse．I d like to have a future in nursing because babies are representing new ideas and hopes．
    I know clearly that my way to success won't be smooth，but before difficulties．I will follow Jdena's example and never give up because I believe：My future depends on myself!

點(diǎn)評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．