【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

During Spring Festival, my parents and some of my relative gave me some gift money. What should I do with the money? I had desired to buy a pair of Nike sports shoes. I have also wanted to have an MP4 player of my own. With the gift money I could afford which I wanted to buy. However, I soon gave down the idea so I knew I was still a student at school. Besides, my parents always lived a simply life. His money was not easily earned. Think of this, I decided to open a savings account at a bank of the following day and save the money.

【答案】

【1】during 后加 the

【2】relative---relatives

【3】have---had

【4】which---what

【5】down---up

【6】so---because/as/since/for

【7】simply—simple

【8】His---Their

【9】Think---Thinking

【10】去掉of

【解析】

【1】during 后加 the考察定冠詞。The是定冠詞，表示特指，文中特指春節(jié)Spring Festival，文意是春節(jié)的時(shí)候，我父母和一些親戚給了我一些壓歲錢。

【2】relative---relatives 考察名詞。relative是名詞“親戚”的意思，其前有some of修飾，所以應(yīng)該用其復(fù)數(shù)形式，文意思春節(jié)的時(shí)候，我父母和一些親戚給了我一些壓歲錢。

【3】have---had 考察時(shí)態(tài)。文中時(shí)態(tài)是過去時(shí)，所以前后應(yīng)保持一致，文意是我也想買一個(gè)MP3播放器。

【4】which---what考察賓語從句。what引導(dǎo)的是afford的賓語從句且在從句中做主語，文意是有了這些壓歲錢我可以買我任何想買的東西。

【5】down---up考察介詞。Give up是固定搭配，表示“放棄”的意思，文意是但是我很快的放棄了我的想法因?yàn)槲疫�是一個(gè)學(xué)生。

【6】so---because/as/since/for考察連詞。I soon gave down the idea 與I knew I was still a student at school之間是因果關(guān)系，我是一個(gè)學(xué)生是原因，我放棄了這個(gè)想法是結(jié)果，文意是但是我很快的放棄了我的想法因?yàn)槲疫�是一個(gè)學(xué)生。

【7】simply—simple考察形容詞。simple 是形容詞，表示“簡單的”，修飾名詞life，文意是除此之外，我的父母也過著簡單的生活。

【8】His---Their考察人稱代詞。文意是他們掙錢也不容易，指代的是“我的父母”，所以用Their

【9】Think---Thinking考察動(dòng)語態(tài)。Thinking是主動(dòng)語態(tài)，是“我”想到這些所以要用主動(dòng)語態(tài)，文意是我想到這些，我決定第二天在銀行開一個(gè)賬戶，把錢存到里頭。

【10】去掉of考察介詞。the following day是時(shí)間狀語，表示“第二天”的意思，其前不用介詞，文意是我想到這些，我決定第二天在銀行開一個(gè)賬戶，把錢存到里頭。

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