Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的外國筆友Jack打算暑假期間來中國體驗生活，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括:

1. 表示歡迎 2. 推薦內(nèi)容 3. 你的祝愿

參考詞匯:recommend(v.) 推薦

注意: 1.詞數(shù)100詞左右;

2.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實學(xué)校與班級名稱;

3.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

How is everything going ? Knowing you are going to visit China in your summer holiday to experience Chinese culture and life, I am glad to welcome you and reply to what you ask for.

To make your trip more unforgettable, I’ll make some recommendations.First of all, Beijing, the capital city of China, is the place where you can fully experience Chinese culture. Besides, if time permits, you had better experience Beijing Opera in Beijing Grand Theatre in person. Meanwhile, some Chinese food such as Beijing Roast Duck, the Hot Pot, can’t be missed because it is quite different from that in your country.

I believe you will have a wonderful trip during your stay in China. Looking forward to your early coming.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，給朋友推薦怎么在中國體驗生活。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達問候，表明寫信目的。

2.具體內(nèi)容：

1）表示歡迎

2）推薦內(nèi)容

3) 你的祝愿

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

be glad to; reply to; ask for; first of all; in person; such as; different from; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. Knowing you are going to visit China in your summer holiday to experience Chinese culture and life, I am glad to welcome you and reply to what you ask for.

2. To make your trip more unforgettable, I’ll make some recommendations.

3. Beijing, the capital city of China, is the place where you can fully experience Chinese culture.

4. If time permits, you had better experience Beijing Opera in Beijing Grand Theatre in person.

5. Some Chinese food such as Beijing Roast Duck, the Hot Pot, can’t be missed because it is quite different from that in your country.

6. I believe you will have a wonderful trip during your stay in China.

7. Looking forward to your early coming.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改