Question

【題目】假如你是高三(1)班班長李華。隨著高考的臨近，你班一些同學(xué)開始緊張焦慮。請你在班級微信群給大家留言，鼓勵大家輕松迎考。留言應(yīng)包括下列要點:

1.癥狀及影響； 2.合理建議； 3.高考祝愿。

注意: 1.短文應(yīng)包括全部要點。2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。3.短文中不可出現(xiàn)考生真實信息。4.詞數(shù): 100左右開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear classmates,

With the entrance examination for college drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.

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Best wishes，

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear classmates,

With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently. Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite, which has a terrible effect on their study. Therefore, they are all eager to get rid of them.

My suggestions are as follows.First of all, it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination. If you treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations , there is no need to worry too much about it. Besides, in order to concentrate more on our classes , we’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep . Only in this way will we keep energetic. Last but not least ,it is advised that you participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.

I do hope that all of us keep confident about the exam. Thus we will achieve great academic performance in the exam. Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一份留言。

第一步：

審題：留言 關(guān)于同學(xué)的焦慮情緒提出建議

人稱：第一、二人稱

時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分說明同學(xué)中焦慮的癥狀和影響，第二部分提出合理建議，第三部分表達對同學(xué)的祝愿

要點：

1. 說明同學(xué)中焦慮的癥狀和影響：失眠、沒有食欲，對學(xué)習(xí)影響不好

2．提出合理的建議

①對高考有正確的態(tài)度：將高考當(dāng)成平常的考試

②保持合理的時間安排，保證睡眠充足

③ 參加課后活動，放松自己

3．表達對同學(xué)的祝愿 ：高考中取得好成績，被理想的大學(xué)錄取

第二步：列提綱（重點詞匯、短語）

the College Entrance Examination；draw near；feel nervous；suffer from；lose appetite；have an effect on；be eager to；attitude towards…；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；achieve great academic performance；be admitted to

第三步：連詞成句

(1)With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.

(2)Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite.

(3) This has a terrible effect on their study.

(4) They are all eager to get rid of them.

(5) It’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.

(6) You treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations.

(7) There is no need to worry too much about it.

(8) We’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep .

(9) We will keep energetic.

(10) You participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.

(12) All of us keep confident about the exam.

(13) We will achieve great academic performance in the exam.

(14) Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities .

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\用句型，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞)

表示時間順序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或補充關(guān)系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果關(guān)系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

連句成文，運用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，使句與句之間邏輯性更強、

段與段之間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。