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9．假設(shè)你叫李華，你的朋友Joan新到你班來學(xué)習(xí)．她想了解班主任李老師的一些情況．請用100字左右的文章來介紹李老師的情況．內(nèi)容要點如下：
1李老師年近四十，1986年任教以來，工作一貫努力，曾多次受到表揚
2他知識豐富，教學(xué)有方，上課生動有趣，學(xué)生愛聽他的課．
3他與學(xué)生關(guān)系融洽，對學(xué)生要求嚴格．經(jīng)常鼓勵大家勤奮學(xué)習(xí)．在他的幫助之下，大家進步很快．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇Email的書寫．從題文來看，這算是一篇敘事類的書面表達考生只需將內(nèi)容精準(zhǔn)無誤的翻譯出來就可以拿到基本分了，當(dāng)然，正確的Email格式與漂亮的語句、高級的詞匯可為學(xué)生帶來更多的分．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：本文將內(nèi)容中的每個提示單獨分段，使得結(jié)構(gòu)清晰．文中時態(tài)運用準(zhǔn)確，介詞也群涌精準(zhǔn)，例如came to，be praised for，is very strict with等，還有一些好的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，比如With his help，we've made much progress 中with結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，is not only our good teacher，but also our good friend 中not only..but also 句型結(jié)構(gòu)的運用．
All these years he has been working very hard，and many times he has been praised for his good work．（高分句型一）
He is getting on well with us，but he is very strict with us．（高分句型二）
Mr．Li is not only our good teacher，but also our good friend．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Joan，
      Our teacher，Mr．Li，is now nearly forty years old．He came to our school in 1986．All these years he has been working very hard，and many times he has been praised for his good work．（高分句型一）He has much knowledge and is good at teaching．All of us enjoy his lessons．They are lively and interesting．He is getting on well with us，but he is very strict with us．（高分句型二） He often encourages us to study hard．With his help，we've made much progress．Mr．Li is not only our good teacher，but also our good friend．（高分句型三）We all love and respect him．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．