Question

【題目】假定你是李華，計(jì)劃高考后參加一個(gè)英語(yǔ)121語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)班，為期四周。下面的廣告引起了你的興趣，請(qǐng)給該培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)寫封信，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir／Madam，

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Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a senior three student and I plan to attend your language school during the summer vacation. I’ve seen your ad and I want to know more information about your special course.

First, when will the morning or afternoon class start and how many students are there in one class? I prefer a small class with only a few partners. Besides, I wish there would be foreign teachers from the USA or Britain. I’d like to know how much I have to pay for the one-month course and whether the language lab and computers supplied are free? By the way, what types of vehicle/ transportation will be available there ?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。主要內(nèi)容是對(duì)一個(gè)英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)廣告的一些疑問(wèn)，作者想通過(guò)寫信來(lái)詳細(xì)了解這個(gè)培訓(xùn)班，比如課堂規(guī)模、師資、費(fèi)用以及環(huán)境的一些具體的問(wèn)題。寫作過(guò)程中要注意書信的格式以及書面用語(yǔ)。圖表中列出的問(wèn)題不能遺漏。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】第一段首先描述了寫信的目的，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己是高三的學(xué)生準(zhǔn)備參加暑期英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)班想更多的了解廣告上的課程。第二段作者根據(jù)圖表提了一些問(wèn)題并表達(dá)了自己對(duì)這些問(wèn)題答案的一種傾向。寫作中用到了first; besides; by the way 這些邏輯詞，使文章邏輯清晰，表達(dá)通順，銜接緊密，最后一句表達(dá)盼回復(fù)。整篇文章語(yǔ)言言簡(jiǎn)意賅，感情真摯，所有要點(diǎn)都沒(méi)有遺漏。文章連貫通順。