Question

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標(biāo)題為：My Teacher Mr. Moore

There’s a teacher Mr. Moore.

Who is lovely and thirty-four.

Always encouraging us to try.

He leads us to a world of “why”.

We all admire him more and more.

注意：

1.不得照抄短詩原文。

2.必須結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開。

3.必須突出短詩的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。

4.短文不能寫成詩歌形式。

5.詞數(shù)：120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Compared with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching .He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting .In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help. We’ve learned how to analyze and settle problem. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much

【解析】這是一篇半開放式的作文，考生在寫作時要注意短詩的重心，切忌偏題，詩主要是對這個老師進行了描述，考生要緊緊抓住這些特點，適當(dāng)展開自己的想象，結(jié)合生活學(xué)習(xí)中老師的特點。在寫作的過程中注意句型的多樣化和連接詞的使用。