Dear editor,

  In the past my hometown was used to be beautiful place.               1________

Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In               2________

order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down               3________

more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was              4________

almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into                5________

wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from            6________

which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should             7________

realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment.                8________

What’s more, they should take good care of the forests and plant             9________

trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions.            10________

 

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解析:

1.去掉was,used to do意為過(guò)去曾經(jīng)一直做某事。

  2.去掉第一個(gè)ineverywhere本身就是一個(gè)副詞,可作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ),in是介詞,后接名詞。

  3house改為houses,應(yīng)該是許多間房子而不是一間房子

  4went改為going,with是介詞,后接名詞、代詞、動(dòng)名詞而不是句子。

  5

  6struck改為strike,由于這句話(huà)是在敘述一個(gè)事實(shí),故動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

  7However改為So,本句與上文的關(guān)系應(yīng)是因果關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

  8terribly改為terrible,形容詞修飾名詞,但terribly是副詞,不能修飾名詞。

  9they改為we,文章一直用的是第一人稱(chēng),故此處改為we。

10instead后加of, instead of是固定搭配。

 


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