Question

16．假設(shè)你是李華，昨天收到筆友Tom的電子郵件，得知他打算來中國學(xué)習(xí)漢語，想咨詢你如何學(xué)好漢語．請你給他回復(fù)一封郵件．要點如下：
你收到他的電子郵件的心情；
對他學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議；
你隨時提供幫助；
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
      2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
      3．開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好．
Dear Tom，
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     Looking forward to seeing you soon in China．
                                                      Yours，
                                                      Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Then add characters together to form words so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns．然后把文字組合在一起，那樣你才能更好的學(xué)會各種固定用法和句型結(jié)構(gòu)．
高分句型二：
Watching TV and listening to the radio are good ways to practice your listening．看電視和聽收音機是練習(xí)你聽力的最后辦法．
句型一 so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns 該句是一個由so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句
句型二Watching TV and listening to the radio are good…該句的主語是由動名詞短語充當(dāng)?shù)�，由于此處用and 連接了二個并列主語，因此謂語使用了復(fù)數(shù)，通常情況下，動名詞作主語謂語使用單數(shù)

解答 Dear Tom，
   I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．Chinese is very useful and interesting，and many foreigners are learning it now．
  Chinese is different from English．First，you'd better remember as many Chinese characters as possible．Then add characters together to form words so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns．（高分句型一）Next is communication．Watching TV and listening to the radio are good ways to practice your listening．（高分句型二）It's also important to do some reading and writing．（提出方法）
   If you have any questions，please tell me．I'm willing to give you help at any time．
  Looking forward to seeing you soon in China．
 Yours，
 Li Hua

點評 該書面表達(dá)為一封電子郵件，該類作文寫作時應(yīng)注意用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將要點中的內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚即可，切忌過度啰嗦，抓不住重點的套話．