9．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪減：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
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注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
       Two years before，I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car．Unfortunate，I had an accident and   hit another car，and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.1 called my parents，so I did  not tell them what had happened．I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away，and that my mother would not sleep if she knew．Therefore，I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil．As a result，nobody knew truth．I still think that  it was the right thing to do．

分析 兩年前作者去巴西旅行，不幸的是作者在那里出了車禍，不得不在醫(yī)院呆了兩個星期，為了不讓父母擔(dān)心，作者向他們隱瞞了這一事實(shí)．

解答 Two years before，I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car．Unfortunate，I had an accident and   hit another car，and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week．1 called my parents，so I did  not tell them what had happened．I knew that they willbe worried about myself because I was so farther away，and that my mother would not sleep if she knew．Therefore，I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil．As a result，nobody knew truth．I still think that  it was the right thing to do．
詳解：
1．before改為ago；考查近義詞辨析，ago用在一段時間之后，表示"…以前"，before位于被修飾詞之前，可指時間，也可指地點(diǎn)．
2．去掉for；考查動詞，rent意為"租賃"，是及物動詞，后面直接跟賓語，故把for去掉．
3．Unfortunately；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語修飾整個句子．
4．去掉a；考查冠詞，in hospital 是固定搭配，意為"住院"．
5．week改為weeks；考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，week是可數(shù)名詞，前面有two修飾，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
6．so改為but；考查連詞，結(jié)合上下文分析此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but，意為"我給父母打電話，但是我沒告訴他們發(fā)生的事情"．
7．will 改為would；考查動詞的時態(tài)，主句用了一般過去式，從句也要用一般過去式．
8．myself改為me；考查人稱代詞，分析句意為"我知道他們會擔(dān)心我"，故用賓格形式me作賓語．
9．farther改為far；考查形容詞，so后面要跟形容詞或副詞的原級形式，故把farther改為far．
10．interested改為interesting；考查分詞做形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞做形容詞修飾物，過去分詞做形容詞修飾人，此處修飾stories，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯題首先要整體理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，結(jié)合語境和上下文關(guān)系，充分運(yùn)用平時掌握的固定搭配，習(xí)慣用法，句型結(jié)構(gòu)等等來發(fā)現(xiàn)文章的錯誤之處，加以修正．

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