Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

October 28, 2017 is an unforgettable day for I took part in the Jingzhou International Marathon! It was the first time that Jingzhou had hosted such international sports event and there were nearly 10,000 runners joined in it. That morning, at the moment I reached the starting place—Guan Gong Yiyuan, I found it crowded with a sea of people, exciting and cheerful. It surprised me most was a 70-year-old runner beside me, which had gone in for 92 competitions after his retirement! Hearing the sound of the starting gun, I dashed out like an arrow. But with the race going on, I felt my legs as heavily as blocks of stone. I was about to give up while the old man cheered me up. Because I was very tired, with his encouragement, I finished my first mini Marathon.

Answer 1

【答案】1.is→was

2.such后面加an

3.joined→joining

4.刪除at

5.exciting→excited

6. It→What

7. which→who

8.heavily→heavy

9. while→when

10.Because→Though/Although

【解析】小題1 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：2017年10月28日對我來說是一個(gè)難忘的日子。根據(jù)后面的I took part in the Jingzhou International Marathon!可以得知回憶以前日子發(fā)生的事情，用一般過去時(shí)，故is 改為was。

小題2 考查冠詞。句意：這是第一次荊州舉辦這么國際化的賽事。表示“如此的”用such+a/an +adj +noun。故such后面加an。

小題3 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：有一萬名選手參加馬拉松比賽。前后動(dòng)詞之間沒有連詞，根據(jù)謂語動(dòng)詞were可以判斷出第二個(gè)出現(xiàn)的動(dòng)詞用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)，選手和參加是主動(dòng)的關(guān)系。故填joined改為joining。

小題4 考查介詞。句意：那天早上我一到起跑點(diǎn)就看到一片人海。一…就用the moment引導(dǎo)狀語從句。故刪除at。

小題5 考查形容詞。句意：擁擠的人群興奮開心。表示人興奮要用-ed形式。故exciting改為excited。

小題6 考查引導(dǎo)詞。句意：最令我驚訝的是站在我身旁的一位70歲高齡的選手。從句位于句首，是主語從句，動(dòng)詞驚訝前用what做主語從句的主語。故It改為What。

小題7 考查關(guān)系代詞。句意：這位70歲的老人已經(jīng)參加過92場比賽了。先行詞是runner，在定語從句中做主語。故which改為who。

小題8 考查形容詞。句意：隨著比賽的進(jìn)行，我感覺我的雙腿像石塊一樣沉。系動(dòng)詞后面用形容詞。故heavily改為heavy。

小題9 考查時(shí)間副詞。句意：我正要放棄時(shí)那位老人過來鼓勵(lì)我。be about to do…when真要做…這時(shí)。故while改為when。

小題10 考查狀語從句連詞。句意：盡管我很累但是有他老人家的鼓勵(lì)，我跑到了終點(diǎn)。前后是“盡管…但是”的含義，讓步狀語從句的連詞。故Because改為Though/Although。