Question

假如你是李華，你的班級打算在寒假組織一次班級活動，有三種活動方案供大家選擇：一、慈善義賣幫助家庭有困難的同學(xué)；二、聘請英語專家介紹有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法；三、組織一次班級新年派對。

請你選擇其中一個方案，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文，提出對該項活動的建議并談?wù)劺碛�。你的寫作中必須包括�?/p>

1．選擇方案，并對該方案提出建議；

2．談?wù)勀闾岢鼋ㄗh的理由。

開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：慈善：charity（n．）

Our class is planning to organize a class activity during winter vacation．

Answer 1

One Possible Student Version Our class is planning to organize a class activity during winter vacation. The winter vocation is around the corner. And I have a preference for holding a charity sale during this vocation, the reasons for which lie in the following aspects. First of all, the money earned in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them through difficulties, but also give them warmness and happiness. Moreover, it will also benefit us a lot. For instance, we will grasp the significance of being considerate and thoughtful. Besides, giving others a hand also makes us delightful. In a word, it is good for us to hold the charity sale for it can help those in want of help and do benefits to our personal development.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文，由題中給出的要求寫一篇作文，作文包括三種方案：一、慈善義賣幫助家庭有困難的同學(xué)；二、聘請英語專家介紹有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法；三、組織一次班級新年派對。請你選擇其中一個方案，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文，提出對該項活動的建議并談?wù)劺碛�。寫作中必須包括�?1．選擇方案，并對該方案提出建議； 2．談?wù)勀闾岢鼋ㄗh的理由。

【亮點說明】：文章用題中給的方案選出了合理的，并且說出了自己的理由。文章用了moreover, besides, for instance等高級詞匯，使文章銜接自然，不生硬。用了以第三人稱為主的描寫，并不是單純以自我為中心描寫，所以文章流暢，有可讀性。