Question

1．假如你是李華．你的美國朋友Mike最近因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大患上了輕度的焦慮癥（anxiety disorders），寫信向你求助．請你用英文給他回一封信，就如何處理壓力給他一些建議．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右（信的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Mike，
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety disorders due to the great stress of studying．
Here I would like to give you some suggestions about dealing with your stress．
First，you ought to learn to study hard as well as relax if necessary．As an old saying goes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．When tired，you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates．Secondly，as is well known，stress is to us what water is to fish，but do not give yourself too much stress or you may feel frustrated and tired，which is bad for your health．Thirdly，I think it would be beneficial if you could share some of your inner emotions with your friends，parents or teachers．
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）When tired，you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates．
該句使用when引導(dǎo)的 時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時候，省略了 主語和be，即when you are tired；
（高分句型二）as is well known，stress is to us what water is to fish…
首先該句使用as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，as意思是正如；復(fù)雜句式A  is to B what C is to D…意思是A對B來說如同C對D…
高級詞匯：deal with對付；if necessary如果必要的話； frustrated 沮喪的；beneficial有好處的；

解答 Dear Mike，
       （首先表達(dá)同情之心）I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety disorders due to the great stress of studying．（主題句）Here I would like to give you some suggestions about dealing with your stress．
    （建議一）   First，you ought to learn to study hard as well as relax if necessary．As an old saying goes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．（高分句型一）When tired，you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates．（建議二）Secondly，（高分句型二）as is well known，stress is to us what water is to fish，but do not give yourself too much stress or you may feel frustrated and tired，which is bad for your health．（建議三）Thirdly，I think it would be beneficial if you could share some of your inner emotions with your friends，parents or teachers．
       I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
                                                                                                                                Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

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