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16．Bullying isn't just confined to the real world．According to the Cyberbullying Research Center，almost half of all young people have been bullied online．Cyberbullying is a form in which people harm other people online deliberately．And unlike the traditional bully，the electronic bully can remain anonymous，so we often don't know who they are．Cyberbullying includes things like spreading lies and rumors online，sending or forwarding unpleasant message via instant messaging，text or on social networks．It's becoming very common among teenagers hese days．They are campaigns against cyberbullying and some places have adopted laws to prevent it．

Kate is a victim of cyberbully．It's so bad that she doesn't want to leave the house．Someone from school has put message on social media saying she's ugly and she should die．It's terrible．

【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個單詞寫出上下文概要；
2．用約120個單詞寫作以下相關(guān)內(nèi)容：
（1）網(wǎng)絡(luò)暴力的原因和影響；
（2）從社會規(guī)范和個人行為談?wù)勅绾螒?yīng)對網(wǎng)絡(luò)暴力．
【寫作要求】
1．發(fā)表觀點時必須提供理由或論據(jù)
2．闡述觀點、提供論據(jù)或敘述經(jīng)歷時，不能直接引用原文語句
3．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．
Cybebullying issue has been a hard nut to crack，which affects students'daily life and even brings about psychological problems．The descriptions presented above are typical examples．
Quite a few factors give rise to the hot issue．To begin with，many media online expose children to negative information，especially concerning violence，which will be rooted in children's heart and mislead them to bullying．Besides，inadequate parental education should also be responsible for their children's ignorance of laws and indifference to others'feelings．They will end up appealing tomore simple but rude ways to serve their purpose．As a consequence，not only does it endanger children's physical condition but also causes many mental problems．
From my point of view，there is no simple solution to cyberbullying．Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring as well as moral education from both schools and parents．It's only in this way that students can grow up healthily and we may build a harmonious society．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
To begin with，many media online expose children to negative information，especially concerning violence，which will be rooted in children's heart and mislead them to bullying
首先，許多媒體在線讓孩子接觸負(fù)面信息，特別是關(guān)于暴力，將植根于孩子的心靈，誤導(dǎo)他們?nèi)テ圬?fù)人．
高分句型二：
As a consequence，not only does it endanger children's physical condition but also causes many mental problems．
因此，它不僅危害兒童的身體狀況也造成了諸多的心理問題．

解答 Cybebullying  issue  has  been  a  hard  nut  to  crack，which  affects  students'daily  life  and  even  brings  about psychological problems．The descriptions presented above are typical examples．
  Quite a few factors give rise to the hot issue．To begin with，many media online expose children to negative information，especially concerning violence，which will be rooted in children's heart and mislead them to bullying（高分句型一）．Besides，inadequate  parental  education  should  also  be  responsible  for  their  children's  ignorance  of  laws  and indifference to others'feelings．They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways to serve their purpose．As a consequence，not only does it endanger children's physical condition but also causes many mental problems（高分句型二）．
  From my point of view，there is no simple solution to cyberbullying．Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring as well as moral education from both schools and parents．It's only in this way that students can grow up healthily and we may build a harmonious society．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．