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1．請(qǐng)改正下面短文中的錯(cuò)誤．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞； 　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉； 　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．　　注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
One Monday afternoon，we were playing the basketball on the playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over．On seeing that，all my classmates rushed to me．Under the help of several other students，Li Xiang，one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately．It turned out that my right ankle got hurt but I had to be sent to hospital．He did not leave until ambulance arrived．The following day，he came to see me．To my greatly relief，he brought textbooks with them and helped me with my lessons．It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend．

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分析 作者在本文中講述了打籃球時(shí)不小心受了傷，好朋友李明給予了作者無(wú)微不至的關(guān)心和幫助，作者為有這樣一位朋友而高興．

解答 One Monday afternoon，we were playing the basketball on the playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over．On seeing that，all my classmates rushed to me．Under the help of several other students，Li Xiang，one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately．It turned out that my right ankle got hurt but I had to be sent to hospital．He did not leave until∧ambulance arrived．The following day，he came to see me．To my greatly relief，he brought textbooks with them and helped me with my lessons．It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend．
詳解：
1．去掉the； 考查冠詞，球類運(yùn)動(dòng)前面不加冠詞the．
2．while 改為when； 考查固定搭配，be doing when 是固定用法，意思是：某事正在發(fā)生這時(shí)…．
3．Under改為 With；考查固定搭配，with the help of …是固定搭配，意為"在…的幫助下"．
4．friend改為 friends； 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，one of 后面用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以friend改為friends．
5．head 改為 headed； 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，全文都是過(guò)去式，這里應(yīng)該一致，故用過(guò)去形式headed．
6．but改為and/so；考查連詞，結(jié)合上下文分析可知，前后為并列關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折，故用and．
7．a(chǎn)mbulance前加the，考查冠詞，此處用定冠詞the表示特指．
8．greatly改為great；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞形式作定語(yǔ)，修飾名詞relief．
9．them改為him；考查人稱代詞，分析句意可知此處的人稱代詞應(yīng)與主語(yǔ)he保持一致，故用單數(shù)形式him．
10．devoting改為devoted；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞做形容詞修飾物，過(guò)去分詞做形容詞修飾人，此處修飾friend，故用過(guò)去分詞形式devoted．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語(yǔ)等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)一步分析各個(gè)句子，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．