Question

隨著改革開放的不斷深入，最近幾年越越多的中學(xué)與國(guó)外的中學(xué)建立了友好交流關(guān)系。針
對(duì)大家對(duì)這種交流看法，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)對(duì)廣大師生進(jìn)行了調(diào)查采訪。假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)
結(jié)合下表寫一篇短文，并附上你對(duì)這種交流的看法。

注意：  1．詞數(shù)120左右。
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

With the deepening of reform and opening, more and more schools have built friendly relation with foreign schools．People have different opinions about it．According to the survey of School English Newspaper, 29% of the interviewees support it, while 63% are against it, with 8% indifferent to it．
The people who support the relation believe it contributes to the cultural exchanges and helps Chinese students to experience the life and study of foreign students and to set a higher pursuit．However, the people against it think it is just a waste of money and time．They said it makes no difference to our school．What’s worse, it will cause the unnecessary mutual competition between the schools．The people indifferent to it said it had nothing to do with them and it is only the few people’s feast．
As far as I’m concerned, all the friendly schools should make more efforts to make the most of the exchanges and make them beneficial to all the staff and students．

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是對(duì)與國(guó)外的中學(xué)建立友好交流關(guān)系的不同觀點(diǎn)，題目給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，也要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，然后是贊同的觀點(diǎn)，還有無(wú)所謂的態(tài)度，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，多用詞組和句型：makes no difference to 對(duì)…沒(méi)有影響，What’s worse更糟糕的是, had nothing to do with 和…無(wú)關(guān)， As far as I’m concerned據(jù)我所知, make the most of 充分利用，make more efforts 更加努力，According to the survey of School English Newspaper, 29% of the interviewees support it, while 63% are against it, with 8% indifferent to it．這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， The people who support the relation believe it contributes to the cultural exchanges and helps Chinese students to experience the life and study of foreign students and to set a higher pursuit．這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，However, the people against it think it is just a waste of money and time．這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)。