Question

11．假如你是高中學(xué)生李華，你校將在下月舉行一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你校外籍教師William寫封短信，邀請(qǐng)他擔(dān)任比賽評(píng)委．信的主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
2．比賽主題：環(huán)保；
3．期待對(duì)方接受邀請(qǐng)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear William，I'm writing to invite you to be a judge in the English speech contest to be held next month in our school．
Here is some specific information about the contest．First，it will be held in our lecture hall on August 3 at 9：00 a．m．a(chǎn)nd last for 3 hours．What's more，considering the current severe environmental pollution and public ignorance of it，the theme of the contest has been set as"Environmental Protection"，which is intended for increasing students'environmental awareness．
I'd appreciate it very much if you could come．Please let me know as soon as possible so I can make arrangements．Looking forward to seeing you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封邀請(qǐng)信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明書(shū)信目的；二介紹比賽時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)和主題；三期待對(duì)方接受邀請(qǐng)．
高分句型：
1．What's more，considering the current severe environmental pollution and public ignorance of it，the theme of the contest has been set as"Environmental Protection"，which is intended for increasing students'environmental awareness．句子里What's more表示"此外"；considering是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，表示"考慮到"；which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句；is intended for 表示"為了"．
此外，考慮到現(xiàn)在嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境污染和公眾對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題的忽視，所以這個(gè)比賽的主題被設(shè)置為"環(huán)境保護(hù)"；這是為了提高學(xué)生的環(huán)境意識(shí)．
2．I'd appreciate it very much if you could come．句子里it 做appreciate的形式賓語(yǔ)，代指if you could come．
如果你能來(lái)我會(huì)很感激的．

解答 One possible version
Dear William，
      I'm writing to invite you to be a judge in the English speech contest to be held next month in our school．
（點(diǎn)明書(shū)信目的）Here is some specific information about the contest．First，it will be held in our lecture hall on August 3 at 9：00 a．m．a(chǎn)nd last for 3 hours．What's more，considering the current severe environmental pollution and public ignorance of it，the theme of the contest has been set as"Environmental Protection"，which is intended for increasing students'environmental awareness．【高分句型一】（介紹比賽時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)和主題）
I'd appreciate it very much if you could come．【高分句型二】Please let me know as soon as possible so I can make arrangements．Looking forward to seeing you．（期待對(duì)方接受邀請(qǐng)）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
英語(yǔ)寫作是一個(gè)人英語(yǔ)綜合水平的體現(xiàn)．英語(yǔ)寫作水平的高低包含的要素很多，而句子構(gòu)造方式是非常重要的要素．一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思．考生應(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文．它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力．因此，要求考生在寫作過(guò)程中牢牢記住以下口訣："先讀提示，要點(diǎn)與格式要弄清；時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視"．學(xué)生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時(shí)間去完成作文．