Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示并結(jié)合一個(gè)事例，就“潛能無(wú)限”這一話題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)下面英文的理解。
As we all know, one’s potential is limitless. Especially in times of crisis, you can never imagine how powerful one’s potential will be. Therefore, it’s unwise to set limits to your potential.
注意：
1)不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
2)文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；詞數(shù)120以上。
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Answer 1

Potential is limitless
It’s universally acknowledged that a person’s potential is limitless. When exposed to various pressure or challenges, many people will be sceptical of themselves, thinking they are incapable. Perhaps, never have they realized how powerful a person’s potential will be.
An interesting story will never fade from my memory though I heard of it many years ago.  An injured soldier was informed that he would spend his rest life on the wheelchair. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink every day. It never rains but pours.
One day, hardly had he got out of a pub when he was robbed by three guys. Unwilling to give in, he struggled against them, however, which set off the robbers’ anger and therefore they set fire to his wheelchair. Just when the big fire was endangering his life, he suddenly jumped out of his wheelchair and ran through a whole street swiftly. Then he stopped to take breath, only to find that he should walk and even run normally.
The story makes me firmly believe that our potential is limitless. Consequently, it’s of vital importance for us to spread the wings of our mind and grow our potential to the fullest.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示和自己的理解，結(jié)合事例，根據(jù)話題“潛能無(wú)限”寫一篇短文。作文不得照抄所給提示語(yǔ)，詞數(shù)達(dá)到120以上。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。寫作中盡可能多使用一些高級(jí)詞匯，定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，來(lái)提升作文的層次。
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：范文使用了較多的重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：主語(yǔ)從句It’s universally acknowledged that a person’s potential is limitless.；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞When exposed to various pressure or challenges，thinking they are incapable，Hearing the news，Unwilling to give in；倒裝句：never have they realized how powerful a person’s potential will be.；so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink every day；hardly had he got out of a pub；讓步狀語(yǔ)從句though I heard of it many years ago；賓語(yǔ)從句was informed that he would spend his rest life on the wheelchair，find that he should walk and even run normally，believe that our potential is limitless
；定語(yǔ)從句which set off the robbers’ anger；固定句型only to find that he should walk and even run normally；固定句型it’s of vital importance for us to spread the wings of our mind等，語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的使用給作文增色很多；
范文使用Perhaps, One day, however, therefore, Just, Consequently等來(lái)銜接上下文，做到了語(yǔ)意連貫；
范文使用了一些重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：be sceptical of, set fire to, of vital importance, to the fullest等，使作文變得充實(shí)；
另外，范文還使用了諺語(yǔ)It never rains but pours.�？傮w來(lái)看，范文是一篇很好的作文。