Question

17．假定你是李華，已經(jīng)在今年的全國中學(xué)生英語演講比賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)．在準(zhǔn)備的參賽的過程中，曾得到過美國外教Mr．Smith的幫助．請(qǐng)你給Mr．Smith寫信，要點(diǎn)包括：
1．完成比賽，已經(jīng)獲獎(jiǎng)．
2．感謝他的幫助．
3．歡迎他再次來中國做客．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫出．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm Li Hua，your former student in China．I am writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English．（高分句型一）I have already finished my speech in the National English speech contest for middle school students．Thanks to your help，I have won the first prize in it and got so much unforgettable experience．（高分句型二）
I'm really grateful to you for your help，without which it would have been much more difficult for me．（高分句型三）I still remember the days when you taught me English．My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work．
If there is a chance，welcome to China，I am looking forward to your coming．
Best regards．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，已經(jīng)在今年的全國中學(xué)生英語演講比賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)．在準(zhǔn)備的參賽的過程中，曾得到過美國外教Mr．Smith的幫助．請(qǐng)你給Mr．Smith寫信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：完成比賽，已經(jīng)獲獎(jiǎng)．感謝他的幫助．歡迎他再次來中國做客． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：express my thanks to 想…表達(dá)感謝；Thanks to 幸虧，由于；be grateful to向…表示感謝；because of由于；look forward to 盼望
I am writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English．（高分句型一）
Thanks to your help，I have won the first prize in it and got so mu chunforgettable experience．（高分句型二）
I'm really grateful to you for your help，without which it would have been much more difficult for me．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      I'm Li Hua，your former student in China．I am writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English．（高分句型一）I have already finished my speech in the National English speech contest for middle school students．Thanks to your help，I have won the first prize in it and got so mu chunforgettable experience．（高分句型二）
      I'm really grateful to you for your help，without which it would have been much more difficult for me．（高分句型三）I still remember the days when you taught me English．My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work．
      If there is a chance，welcome to China，I am looking forward to your coming．
      Best regards．
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．