Question

【題目】請閱讀下面文子及圖表，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

In a recent survey of 300 Chinese born after 1990, 54 percent of the respondents said they had hair loss, 51 percent had poorer eyesight, 45percent gained weight and 35 percent had weakened immunity. At the same time, about 65 percent said they always stayed up late. Meanwhile, 56.7 percent of interviewees said they didn’t know how to live a healthy life.

Wu Feng, who works at a private company in Beijing, was warned in this year’s physical examination report about hyperlipemia, a condition which he ascribed (歸因于) to his diet and the fast pace of his life and work.

“At work, I usually sit in the office for hours without moving my body. And when I eat at the canteen, the food is quite oily. What’s more, I like to order fast food, such as fried chicken, at night when I work extra hours,” Wu said.

A post-90s programmer Wang Ke has been seeing abnormal parameters in his medical report in the past few years. He knew he had some bad habits, but it was not easy for him to change. “I know drinking too much milk tea is unhealthy, but I couldn’t stop myself,” he said.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析不健康的生活方式的危害；

3. 根據(jù)你的實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勅绾螕碛薪】档纳�活方式�?/span>

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Among all the factors that influence health, lifestyle plays a dominant role. But many youngsters of today are leading an unhealthy lifestyle, which has caused great damage to their health.

An unhealthy lifestyle is definitely one of the major contributors to many health issues. What is widely known is that various illnesses are associated with lack of exercise and an unhealthy diet. Besides, sleep deprivation can not only affect our memory but also our overall health. Worse still, an unhealthy lifestyle may predict a shorter lifespan.

From a well-being perspective, it’s crucial that we should develop a healthy lifestyle. Exercise should be taken regularly to boost our immune system. Eating right is also a practical method of living healthily. In addition, too much stress poses a threat to our health, so we should learn to manage it. Most importantly, bear in mind that only with self-discipline can we build and maintain a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)考查學(xué)生的讀寫能力。

本篇讀寫任務(wù)首先要求用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析不健康的生活方式的危害；根據(jù)你的實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勅绾螕碛薪】档纳�活方式。半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides，worse still，in addition，most importantly等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。切記寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；不必寫標(biāo)題。