Question

【題目】有的學(xué)者認(rèn)為當(dāng)前國內(nèi)的“英語熱”影響了母語學(xué)習(xí)。請就這一認(rèn)識給某中學(xué)生英文報社投稿，闡明自己的觀點。要點如下：

1．學(xué)英語的重要性（與人交往，獲取信息，了解世界）

2．學(xué)漢語的首要性（母語的用途、意義）

3．自己的建議。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

2．文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editors,

Recently some scholars think that “the rush of English learning” has influenced the learning of Chinese.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently some scholars think that “the rush of English learning” has influenced the learning of Chinese. As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. I’d like to share mine with you.

It’s known to all that English is the most widely-used language in the world. Learning English can help us to communicate with people from foreign countries. We can also get a lot of information through English , helping us to know more about the outside world.

But Chinese is our mother tongue . In China, we can’t go without it.We need to use it to communicate and do a lot of things. So we must, first of all, learn Chinese well.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：有的學(xué)者認(rèn)為當(dāng)前國內(nèi)的“英語熱”影響了母語學(xué)習(xí)。請就這一認(rèn)識給某中學(xué)生英文報社投稿，闡明自己的觀點。要點如下：1．學(xué)英語的重要性（與人交往，獲取信息，了解世界）；2．學(xué)漢語的首要性（母語的用途、意義）；3．自己的建議。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫.要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。避免全部使用簡單句。

【亮點說明】Recently some scholars think that “the rush of English learning” has influenced the learning of Chinese.句中運用了賓語從句； As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. 高級句式As far as this topic is concerned,的巧妙使用，恰如其分；It’s known to all that English is the most widely-used language in the world.主語從句在句中出現(xiàn)；Learning English can help us to communicate with people from foreign countries.動名詞短語作主語更顯經(jīng)典；We can also get a lot of information through English , helping us to know more about the outside world.現(xiàn)在分詞作自然的結(jié)果狀語；