Question

《21Century學(xué)生英文報(bào)》記者采訪(fǎng)了你�！盃�(zhēng)做好學(xué)生好公民” 活動(dòng)， 并邀請(qǐng)你就活動(dòng)前后同學(xué)們的言行變化寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)報(bào)道，同時(shí)發(fā)表你個(gè)人看法。

活動(dòng)前	活動(dòng)后
1．上課遲到，作業(yè)拖拉。	1. 準(zhǔn)時(shí)到校，作業(yè)認(rèn)真。
2．不問(wèn)候老師，課后喧嘩。	2. 尊敬師長(zhǎng)，幫助他人。
3．乘車(chē)插隊(duì)，上車(chē)搶座。	3. 乘車(chē)排隊(duì)，上車(chē)讓座。

注意：

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提供的信息寫(xiě)篇報(bào)道，個(gè)人看法可自由發(fā)揮。

詞數(shù)：120左右；開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：活動(dòng) campaign; 搶座位 scramble for seats

At the beginning of the term, a campaign “to be a good student and a good citizen” was launched in our school, and great changes have taken place since then.

Answer 1

At the beginning of the term, a campaign “to be a good student and a good citizen” was launched in our school, and great changes have taken place since then.

Before the campaign, we used to be late for school and failed to hand in our homework in time. Often, we forgot to greet our teachers and after class we made loud noises. Worse still, we jumped the queue when waiting for buses and scrambled for seats on board.

However, the campaign have changed us a lot. We are no longer late for school and are more careful in our homework. We have learned to show respect for the elders, help others, wait in line for buses and give up seats to other passengers.

The campaign is a very good experience, from which we have learned a lot. More importantly, we have got rid of many bad habits and have become better students at school and better citizens in society.

解析:

文章行文力爭(zhēng)自然流暢，文章要點(diǎn)齊全，意思表達(dá)真切。詳略得當(dāng)，重點(diǎn)突出。從語(yǔ)言使用的角度來(lái)說(shuō)，要使用一些生動(dòng)的動(dòng)詞，準(zhǔn)確的名詞，同時(shí)為了使本文串聯(lián)自然，可以使用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)為連接詞，將文章按照時(shí)間順序敘述完整。