Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你班的留學(xué)生Charles即將結(jié)束三周的假期從美國返回。你想委托他為你代購一個剃須刀，作為生日禮物送給爸爸。請按照以下要求給他寫一封電子郵件：

1．品牌：Gillette：

2．價格：30美元左右。

參考詞匯：剃須刀shaver

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右：

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：

3．開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Charles，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Charles,

I haven’t seen you for over three weeks. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much! But it won’t be long before we meet again, isn’t it?

Charles, could you do me a favor, please? My father’s birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world. You can bring it back when you come back, and I will pay you back for that. Thank you very much.

Looking forward to your coming soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇為書信作文，一般開頭是問候語。文章李華想讓查爾斯帶一個剃須刀，要交代清楚剃須刀的品牌和價格。因為是書信，語言不需要太正式。要用簡練的語言表達(dá)出要點。考生可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章內(nèi)容充實。注意詞匯拼寫要正確，句式多樣化，還要正確使用連接詞。使文章通順連貫。

【亮點說明】文章開頭問候了朋友，用了非常簡練的語言，使人讀起來跟親切。正文交代了買剃須刀的原因，并明確交代了剃須刀的品牌和大約價位。文章行文流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式多樣化。