1.假定你是李華.你的美國(guó)筆友Tom給你發(fā)了封郵件,詢(xún)問(wèn)你寒假做了些什么,新學(xué)期有什么打算.因?yàn)闇?zhǔn)備開(kāi)學(xué)后的考試,你未能及時(shí)回復(fù).請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回郵件.
 提示:
 1.未能及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因并道歉;
 2.假期大部分時(shí)間復(fù)習(xí)功課,但也探親訪友、閱讀小說(shuō);
 3.新學(xué)期努力學(xué)習(xí),爭(zhēng)取考上理想大學(xué).
 注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)出,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
 Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________ 
                                                  Yours,
  Li Hua.

分析 書(shū)信類(lèi)作文是高考的主流文體,在書(shū)寫(xiě)有關(guān)書(shū)信方面的英語(yǔ)作文時(shí),首先要寫(xiě)好開(kāi)頭,注意稱(chēng)呼的使用,如:Mr或Mrs等等.如果開(kāi)頭已給出的話,則需要將重點(diǎn)放在書(shū)寫(xiě)正文上.書(shū)寫(xiě)正文的時(shí)候一定要注意:不要遺漏文中給出的要點(diǎn).需要先將文中的內(nèi)容表述清楚,語(yǔ)句要通順流暢.盡可能地避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,做到文中語(yǔ)意清楚,簡(jiǎn)單明了.如有需要的話,可適當(dāng)增加一些細(xì)節(jié),以使表達(dá)更加清楚.寫(xiě)作時(shí)常運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí),也可運(yùn)用一些情態(tài)動(dòng)詞.人稱(chēng)要根據(jù)內(nèi)容來(lái)定,可使用第一人稱(chēng)也可使用其他人稱(chēng).在書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)一定要盡可能地得體地使用所學(xué)詞匯和句型.如能使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、非謂語(yǔ),常用的短語(yǔ)和句型,則會(huì)給你的文章增添色彩,提高作文的檔次,使文章的可讀性更強(qiáng).恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ),可以使文章表達(dá)更加自然、流暢.
Recently,I've been so occupied with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time.(高分句型) so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)構(gòu)狀語(yǔ)從句
However,I still managed to spare some time to travel to several places of interest and read books and newspapers to refresh myself.(高分句型)spare some time to do sth 抽出時(shí)間去做某事
In the new term,I'll work harder and do my best to make greater progress,hoping to be admitted into Beijing University.(高分句型)hoping…屬于現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)

解答 Dear Alice
I'm very happy to receive your email.I'm really sorry for this late reply.
Recently,I've been so occupied with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time.(高分句型) As a senior 3 student,I had to devote most of my time to reviewing my lessons during the winter vacation.However,I still managed to spare some time to travel to several places of interest and read books and newspapers to refresh myself.(高分句型)
In the new term,I'll work harder and do my best to make greater progress,hoping to be admitted into Beijing University.(高分句型)
All the best wishes.(109)
                                                         Yours sincerely,
                                                                    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫,比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞,使文章流暢、通順,并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感.(1)認(rèn)真審題,確定體裁. (2)構(gòu)思要點(diǎn).根據(jù)題目要求,理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn).設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落,考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)等,把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái),構(gòu)成文章框架.(3)選詞造句,避難選易.(4)認(rèn)真檢查,避免錯(cuò)誤.仔細(xì)閱讀全文,查找是否有錯(cuò),注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、字母大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤,句式是否正確.邏輯是否一致.

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