Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （滿分15分）

假如你是李華，你的朋友Jack正在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)漢語。他學(xué)習(xí)漢語非常吃力，不知怎么學(xué)，請(qǐng)你給出建議，幫助他渡過難關(guān)。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.多聽中文廣播，多看報(bào)。

2.找中國(guó)人聊天。

3．用漢語寫日記。只要堅(jiān)持下去，就一定能學(xué)會(huì)。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．信的開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack，

I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in learning Chinese．However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice．Here are the tips to help you：

Firstly, why not listen to Chinese broadcast and read Chinese newspaper? If you do that, you will improve your Chinese step by step．Secondly, you should make Chinese friends as many as possible．You can talk to them in Chinese when you meet．In that way you will learn Chinese quickly．Thirdly, it would be a good idea to keep a diary in Chinese．As long as you work hard at Chinese, I think you will learn it well．Just as the saying goes: where there is a will, there is a way．

I hope you will find these ideas useful．

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語take one’s advice采納某人的建議；listen to聽；step by step逐漸地；Thirdly, it would be a good idea to keep a diary in Chinese．這個(gè)句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；Just as the saying goes: where there is a will, there is a way還運(yùn)用了諺語來對(duì)主題進(jìn)行升華；