Question

作為一名中學(xué)生，平時你是否愿意和自己的老師交流？你認為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是什么樣的？如何才能建立這種關(guān)系？請寫一篇短文，就這一話題談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

注意：

1．可以使用一些具體的事例支持你的論點；

2．詞數(shù)在120～150之間。

Students are becoming unwilling to confess to（承認，坦白）their teachers because

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Love and Concern Make an Ideal Relationship

Students are becoming unwilling to confess to（承認，坦白）their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the study of the students.

But I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. They show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot.

In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care, understanding, and respect, so they can exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust their teachers and give voice to their feeling frankly. Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語lay too much emphasis on強調(diào)；find it adj for sb to do 對某人來說。。；In this case在這種情況下；In my opinion在我看來；be filled with充滿；share sth with sb 與某人分享某物；I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot.這個句子from which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust their teachers and give voice to their feeling frankly.這個句子to do 表示目的；Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.這個句子中only +狀語+部分倒裝；

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