11.文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Dear Miss Li,
I'm one of your student in Class Six,Senior Three.Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English.To begin with,it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words.In addition,grammar is too complex to understand,that has influenced my English writing seriously.And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying.Faced with such a dilemma,you hope that you can give me a hand.Would you provide me with some effectively approaches?Secondly,I believe that I will have good command of what you teach,if you will slow down your speed in the class.There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.

分析 本文主要講述作者學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)有困難.特別是很難記住許多新單詞,也覺得語(yǔ)法規(guī)則太復(fù)雜而不懂,希望李女士能給些好的建議來(lái)提高英語(yǔ).

解答 Dear Miss Li,
I'm one of your student in Class Six,Senior Three.Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English.To begin with,it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words.In addition,grammar is too complex to understand,that has influenced my English writing seriously.And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying.Faced with such a dilemma,you hope that you can give me a hand.Would you provide me with some effectively approaches?Secondly,I believe that I will have∧good command of what you teach,if you will slow down your speed in the class.There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.
詳解:
1.student改為students 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù).one of意為"…之一",后接名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式.
2.studied改為studying 考查現(xiàn)在分詞.此處是when+動(dòng)詞現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ).
3.of改為for 考查固定句型."It is+adj.+for sb to do sth."常用于表示事物的特征特點(diǎn),表示客觀形式的形容詞,如easy,hard,difficult,interesting,importang等;"It is+adj.+of sb to do sth."用于表示人物的性格,品德,表示主觀感情或態(tài)度的形容詞,如good,kind,nice,clever,foolish,right等.
4.that改為which 考查定語(yǔ)從句.分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句,先行詞是前面整個(gè)句子,在從句中作主語(yǔ),用關(guān)系代詞which.
5.a(chǎn)re改為is 考查主謂一致. 主語(yǔ)performance是單數(shù),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式is.
6.you改為I 考查代詞.本文主要是以第一人稱來(lái)寫的,用代詞I.
7.effectively改為effective 考查形容詞.a(chǎn)pproaches是名詞,要用形容詞修飾.
8.加a 考查固定搭配.have a good command of意為"掌握得好;精通于",是固定搭配.
9.去掉will 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài).在條件狀語(yǔ)從句中,主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí),從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).
10.whether改為that 考查連詞.There is no doubt句型中,no doubt后接意思完整的同位語(yǔ)從句時(shí)用連接that.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文,短文故事,書信等,具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性.短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際,從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作.首先,通讀全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯,在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好,再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò).其次,要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò).這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意.最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍,檢查答案是否正確,感覺是否還有不妥之處,最終形成定稿.

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