Question

13．假如你是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友Forbes打算抽空到中國學(xué)習(xí)太極（Tai Chi），他寫信向你求助，請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對方寫一封回信：
1．介紹學(xué)太極好處；2．負(fù)責(zé)聯(lián)系學(xué)習(xí)地點(diǎn)和老師；
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Forbes，
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon．（高分句型一）I'm quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly．
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art，but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise．（高分句型二）Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives．（高分句型三）
Concerning your learning location and instructor，I'm so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you，for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country．（高分句型四）As a result，you can rely on me．
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的英國網(wǎng)友Forbes打算抽空到中國學(xué)習(xí)太極（Tai Chi），他寫信向你求助，請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對方寫一封回信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：介紹學(xué)太極好處；負(fù)責(zé)聯(lián)系學(xué)習(xí)地點(diǎn)和老師；2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：are willing to愿意；give you a hand幫助某人； not only，but also不僅，而且；As a result結(jié)果是；rely on依賴
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon．（高分句型一）
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art，but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise．（高分句型二）Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives．（高分句型三）
Concerning your learning location and instructor，I'm so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you，for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country．（高分句型四

解答 Dear Forbes，
       It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon．（高分句型一）I'm quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly．
      Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art，but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise．（高分句型二）Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives．（高分句型三）
      Concerning your learning location and instructor，I'm so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you，for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country．（高分句型四）As a result，you can rely on me．
      Looking forward to your coming!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．