Question

1．假如你是李平，你的好朋友李華來信說，他的同桌經(jīng)常打斷他向他請教問題，他擔(dān)心會(huì)影響自己的學(xué)習(xí)．請你用英語寫一封回信．內(nèi)容包括：
         1．給別人講題也會(huì)提升自己；
         2．人人都有長處和不足，可以互相學(xué)習(xí)；
         3．幫助別人學(xué)習(xí)可以使他們樹立自信，從而促進(jìn)友誼．
         注意：
         1．詞數(shù)：120-150，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
         2．包括所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Dear Li Hua，
         How are things going？                                                                   
                                                                                    Yours，
Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Firstly，helping others do the exercise will improve yourself
高分句型二：
Thirdly，helping other study can let their have the confidence，which will help improve your friendship
句型一 helping others do the exercise will improve yourself 該句的主語為動(dòng)名詞短語充當(dāng)
句型二①helping other study can let their 該句主語為動(dòng)名詞短語充當(dāng)，注意謂語應(yīng)使用單數(shù)
            ②which will help improve your friendship 該句是一個(gè)由which充當(dāng)引導(dǎo)詞，且在句中充當(dāng)主語的非限制性定語從句，which替代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容

解答 Dear Lihua，
   I am Liping，do you miss me these days？I have already gotten your letter．I think why can't you change your mind？
   Firstly，helping others do the exercise will improve yourself．（高分句型一）It will help you think about the exercise．And the secondly，everyone has the shortcoming，if he has the short also has the strongpoint certainly．I think you can help each other．Thirdly，helping other study can let their have the confidence，which will help improve your friendship．（高分句型二）At last，I think you should think about these things．We are too young，so we always do the strange things，sometimes the matter does not good to us．but I want to say these things are meaningful．（分析問題）
    I hope you can overcome these trouble，and you will find it is a better day tomorrow．（給予祝愿）
   Yours sincerely，
   Liping

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．