Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你校將于下周六舉行“我的拿手菜（My Special Recipe）”大賽，并舉辦健康飲食講座。你的留學(xué)生朋友Jackson對中國飲食很感興趣，請你用英語寫一封email邀請他參加此次活動。內(nèi)容包括以下要點：

1. 活動時間和地點；

2. 活動的內(nèi)容和意義。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jackson,

Our school will hold a cooking competition next Saturday, which is titled “My Special Recipe”. I know you’re interested in Chinese food, so I’d like to invite you to attend it.

The competition is intended to highlight the students’ practical cooking skills, assist students in getting into healthy eating habits and enrich their school life as well. It is bound to be a spectacular scene, where you can taste a variety of different dishes and foods. In addition, a lecture on healthy diets will also be delivered, from which you can learn how to develop a healthy eating habit.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；，邀請對中國飲食感興趣的留學(xué)生朋友Jackson參加學(xué)校舉辦的舉行“我的拿手菜（My Special Recipe）”大賽。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如： a cooking competition，Chinese food，practical cooking skills，healthy diets等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如Our school will hold a cooking competition next Saturday, which is titled “My Special Recipe”，It is bound to be a spectacular scene, where you can taste a variety of different dishes and foods.， a lecture on healthy diets will also be delivered, from which you can learn how to develop a healthy eating habit.。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。