Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華。最近你和同學(xué)組織了“文明使用共享單車”的活動，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇稿件介紹你們的活動過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：1.civilized 文明的

2. leaflets 宣傳單

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, the increasing popularity of shared bikes has made our lives more convenient. However, my classmates and I often noticed some shared bikes placed messily everywhere. We felt upset and decided to make a change to the uncivilized behavior.

First, we had a heated discussion about the problem at our class meeting. We shared our ideas and came up with a great plan. After making full preparations, we started to take action.

On Saturday morning, we gathered outside the subway station near our school. Firstly, we began with those messy shared bikes there and tried to put them in order. People passing by all appreciated what we did. Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement, we really felt excited. Then, in order to encourage people’s civilized behavior, we put up a poster saying “PLEASE BE CIVILIZED WHILE USING A SHARED BIKE”. Meanwhile, some of us helped to give out leaflets. Of course, we drew much attention from the passers-by. Hopefully our action would make a difference.

This experience actually inspires me a lot. The idea of sharing requires people’s awareness of civilization. When the uncivilized behavior occurs, it is our duty to do our best to stop it. I strongly believe that in this way our society will become better and better

【解析】試題分析：本文屬于看圖說話類作文。首先要讀懂圖片隱含的信息，本文有四幅圖，而且要求是按先后順序，所以一定要注意順序的問題；其次，根據(jù)圖片隱含的信息把每幅圖的主題找到，然后分別寫出每幅圖的主題句，也就是說把文章主體部分的大綱要列好，最后結(jié)合自己的看法，寫出相應(yīng)的總結(jié)和感受。本文是關(guān)于共享單車的一次活動，從舉辦活動的原因到計劃再到實施再到最后的呼吁，循序漸進(jìn)，井然有序，所以寫作的過程中一定要注意 順序，巧用連接詞，巧妙銜接，合理安排。

【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。賓語從句的使用：People passing by all appreciated what we did.現(xiàn)在分詞的合理使用：Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement, we really felt excited.時間狀語從句的使用：When the uncivilized behavior occurs, it is our duty to do our best to stop it.此外，連接詞的使用也是非常到位的：however，first，firstly，then，meanwhile.