Question

【題目】書面表達

最近在學(xué)校的論壇上，你看到有不少同學(xué)用英語在交流聽力如何突破的問題。 以下要點提示，寫一篇英語網(wǎng)帖參與交流。內(nèi)容包括：

1.掌握聽力技巧和方法，多向老師和同學(xué)求助；

2.聽、說相結(jié)合，多聽的同時注重口語訓(xùn)練。

3.充分利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)、英文電臺等聽力資源。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可以適當(dāng)展開聯(lián)想。

Answer 1

【答案】

Every student may feel it a little difficult to improve their listening ability in English learning. Now I want to share some experience with everybody. I hope it can help you in a way.

First, listening skills and methods are very important. And I think you may turn to your teachers and classmates in time when necessary. Besides, don’t always practice listening only because listening and speaking are tightly connected. Only if your oral English is perfect is your listening ability perfect, too. So you need to practice listening and speaking at the same time. Third, make full use of all the resources of listening around you, such as listening to songs on the radio or the Internet and so on. They often play an important part in improving your listening ability.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于說明文，根據(jù)提示信息來交流聽力突破的問題。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Only if your oral English is perfect is your listening ability perfect, too.此處only if 位于句首，主句需用半倒裝。此外，文章還使用了大量短語Only if，make full use of，play an important part in等短語。