分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息加拿大高中生David在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上登出啟事notice,希望結(jié)識(shí)一位中國朋友,以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言、文化.假設(shè)你是曲師大附中的李華,請(qǐng)?jiān)诳吹竭@則啟事后,用英文給David發(fā)出一封電子郵件,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:①.你怎樣得知他的愿望 ②.你愿意成為他的朋友③.你打算如何幫助他 ④.你盼望他的回復(fù)2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):make friends with 交朋友;in order to以便,為了;be good at擅長(zhǎng);What's more而且;keep in touch with 保持聯(lián)系;
I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture.(高分句型一)
I was born in Qufu in 2001,and I study in the Middle School Attached to Qufu Normal University and I am good at English.(高分句型二)
What's more,we can have chats on the Internet in Ch inese or English and I'll tell you the customs,the festivals,the foods and so on of the Chinese.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear David,
I am LiHua.I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture.(高分句型一)I want to be your friend.Now I'd like to introduce myself to you.I was born in Qufu in 2001,and I study in the Middle School Attached to Qufu Normal University and I am good at English.(高分句型二)
I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails.What's more,we can have chats on the Internet in Ch inese or English and I'll tell you the customs,the festivals,the foods and so on of the Chinese.(高分句型三)I hope we can keep in touch with each other.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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