Question

【題目】假定你是李華，目前正在幫助你們班新來的英國交換生Eric學(xué)習(xí)漢語。因?yàn)橛惺拢�你不得不推遲原定于本周六下午的學(xué)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)。請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示歉意；2. 解釋原因；3. 補(bǔ)救辦法。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

I’m sorry to say that I can’t help you with your Chinese learning this Saturday afternoon. This morning my parents asked me to visit my grandparents on Saturday. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we make it this Sunday afternoon? If it’s convenient for you, I’d like to meet you at your home at 3 pm. If not, let me know what time would be better. I will be free any time on Sunday.

Sorry again for the change.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，就計(jì)劃的改變進(jìn)行解釋和補(bǔ)救。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

要求：1. 表示歉意；2. 解釋原因；3. 補(bǔ)救辦法。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be sorry to do ; help you with your Chinese learning ；visit my grandparents; cause you too much trouble; make it this Sunday afternoon; be convenient for you ; If not; be free

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m sorry to say that I can’t help you with your Chinese learning this Saturday afternoon.

2. This morning my parents asked me to visit my grandparents on Saturday.

3. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

4. Shall we make it this Sunday afternoon?

5. If it’s convenient for you, I’d like to meet you at your home at 3 pm.

6. If not, let me know what time would be better.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改