Question

11．請以Traffic and Safety 為話題寫一篇100詞左右的發(fā)言稿．
開頭已給出：
Hello，classmates．I promise to do my part to maintain the road safety．                     

Answer 1

分析 本文為半開放性寫作．要求以交通安全為話題寫一篇發(fā)言稿．僅僅有話題規(guī)定而無具體內(nèi)容提示，需要自行發(fā)揮豐富文章內(nèi)容．考生注意文章的條理要清晰，適當(dāng)使用連接詞．審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱使用一人稱．
重要短語：
due to，因?yàn)�，put emphasis on，強(qiáng)調(diào)，reckless driving，粗心駕駛，regardless of，不管，不顧．
高分句子：
1．Records show that every year a lot of people die in traffic accidents．本句含有重要句型Records show that，記錄表明．
2．so many people violate traffic regulations that we cannot put too much emphasis on the importance of traffic safety．
本句為含that　引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，we cannot put too much emphasis on the importance of traffic safety來解釋說明句子內(nèi)容．
3．Only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．本句中，only引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，后面主語需倒裝．

解答 Hello，classmates．I promise to do my part to maintain the road safety．（點(diǎn)明發(fā)言話題）
　　Traffic safety is everybody's business．Records show that every year a lot of people die in traffic accidents．（高分句型）Some of the accidents are due to mechanical problems．
　　However，most of them are the results of careless and reckless driving，and could be avoided．a(chǎn) lot of people disregard traffic signals and rules．they drive regardless of speed limits，run through red lights，drive in the wrong direction，talk and laugh while driving，and turn as they wish without giving signals．they don't slow down while approaching crossroads．so many people violate traffic regulations that we cannot put too much emphasis on the importance of traffic safety．（高分句型）
　　Only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．（高分句型）
　　That　is　all，thank　you．（結(jié)束語）

點(diǎn)評 對于開放式作文，考生寫作時，可以選取能運(yùn)用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型的點(diǎn)進(jìn)行展開，對于沒有把握的地方，要靈活變通；要盡量運(yùn)用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合；要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然；還要注意書寫規(guī)范，做到卷面干凈，字跡清晰．