Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jack在觀看《中國(guó)漢語(yǔ)橋》Chinese Bridge Contest節(jié)目時(shí)，決定學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)語(yǔ)言文化，希望你能給他一些建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封信。

1．通過(guò)中國(guó)古典作品了解中國(guó)文化；

2．借助電視節(jié)目以及報(bào)刊更好地了解中國(guó)國(guó)情；

3．和中國(guó)朋友多溝通。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100字。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack，

I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture. I’d like to offer you some proposals, which I think can be of benefit to your Chinese study.

To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon. Besides，watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning. Last but not least，you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently. Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.

I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study and that you will make greater progress in it.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封建議信，給英國(guó)朋友Jack就如何學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)語(yǔ)言文化給出一些建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1．通過(guò)中國(guó)古典作品了解中國(guó)文化；

2．借助電視節(jié)目以及報(bào)刊更好地了解中國(guó)國(guó)情；

3．和中國(guó)朋友多溝通。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be interested in; Chinese Bridge Contest; Chinese language and culture; proposal; be of benefit to; classical literature; Tb programs; be supposed to do; communicate with; make progress.

第三步：連詞成句

1. I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture.

2. I’d like to offer you some proposals,

3 To learn the Chinese language and culture well， you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.

4. Watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning.

5. You are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently

6. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least;

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改