Question

假設你是高一新生李華。月考之后，你的英語老師Ms Shen 希望了解每位同學的英語學習情況，并征求教學建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。
1. 對英語學習的認識；
2. 自己目前的英語水平；
3.自己英語學習存在的主要問題；
4.對英語教學的兩點建議。
注意：
1.詞數100左右；
2.信的開頭和結尾已給出。
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Dear Ms Shen,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms Shen,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is become a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorise new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性作文，是老師征求學生對自己教學的意見。只是大概給出三個方面，具體的要點要由學生自己來添加，在第一部分中要充分表示出對英語重要性的認識，把英語作文一門非常重要的學科來學習。第二部分可以具體闡述自己的學習問題，如閱讀能力不強，寫作不熟練，詞匯有較大問題；對老師教學的建議可以從多給學生練習的方面著手。
點評：半開放性作文對考生的要求較高，要求考生自己篩選要點，合理組織要點和謀篇布局。在寫作時注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯句型，提高文章的層次和檔次。