Question

6．你的朋友王林剛轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)去了一所新學(xué)校，學(xué)校的各個(gè)學(xué)生社團(tuán)（associations）正在納新．面對(duì)眾多的選擇，王林沒(méi)了主意，寫信向你求助．假如你是李越，你認(rèn)為可以考慮參加籃球協(xié)會(huì)（the Basketball Association）或者英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部（the English Club）．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給王林寫一封100-120詞的信，推薦這兩個(gè)社團(tuán)，并分別說(shuō)明推薦理由．
注意：信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開(kāi)放式作文，寫作時(shí)不僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：I feel that it would be wise if you could join the Basketball Association since you love it so much．我覺(jué)著如果你能加入籃球協(xié)會(huì)是明智的，因?yàn)槟惴浅Ｏ矚g它．本句中that引導(dǎo)的是賓語(yǔ)從句，在賓語(yǔ)從句中it是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是if you could join the Basketball Association since you love it so much．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work，it can also promote your friendship with your new companions．它不僅可以滿足你的興趣，讓你放松繁重的學(xué)業(yè)，它也可以促進(jìn)你的友誼與你的新同伴．這是一個(gè)倒裝句，Not only至于句首句子做部分倒裝．

解答 Dear Wang Lin，
In your letter，you have asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your new school．Thanks for trusting me and I'll try to make some suggestions．
I feel that it would be wise if you could join the Basketball Association since you love it so much．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work，it can also promote your friendship with your new companions．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）Besides，the English Club is also a wonderful choice．Apart from improving your English study，their activities are helpful in many aspects．For instance，your skills of communication will turn out to be better than before．By the way，maybe it is a good chance to make friends with English native speakers．
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．If you have any more problems，please contact me at any time．I'm willing to discuss with you whenever you need．
                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                    Li Yue

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查開(kāi)放性作文寫作，開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力．在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．