Question

在智能手機(jī)日益普及的當(dāng)下，我們已經(jīng)跨入了移動(dòng)時(shí)代。智能手機(jī)五花八門的功能影響著我們的生活、社交、學(xué)習(xí)、工作、消費(fèi)、休閑等各個(gè)方面。請(qǐng)你就某一個(gè)方面談?wù)勚悄苁謾C(jī)帶給你的影響以及你對(duì)這種影響的看法。
要求：根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇120詞左右的短文。
提示：智能手機(jī)：smartphone     微信：Wechat

Answer 1

Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world. Just as what computers once achieved, smartphones are transforming our life in every possible way—how we socialize, entertain, and study.
I used to contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends. I can also receive the latest news by subscribing to famous websites. It makes me feel so connected with the rest of the world.
I am truly grateful for the convenience, connection and comfort brought by this marvelous technology. But meanwhile I feel deeply anxious. To stay informed, I constantly update my Wechat, for which I am often distracted. Therefore, we should be cautious not to fall slaves to the smartphones.

試題分析：考查開放性作文。這篇作文給出了一個(gè)關(guān)于智能手機(jī)的話題，并沒有什么提綱。要求考生我圍繞智能手機(jī)帶給你的影響以及你對(duì)這種影響的看法來(lái)寫。這就要考生自由發(fā)揮，充實(shí)內(nèi)容，要言之有物，不能干巴巴的幾句話，對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。同時(shí)在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文用了一些常見短語(yǔ)：used to 過(guò)去常常，subscribe to 訂閱，句型上更是變化多樣：Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world.這句話使用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)， Just as what computers once achieved, smartphones are transforming our life in every possible way—how we socialize, entertain, and study.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， I contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends.這句話使用了定語(yǔ)從句， To stay informed, I constantly update my Wechat, for which I am often distracted. 這句話使用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。