Question

10．下面短文中有10處語言錯誤．請在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
    This summer，I was lucky to have joined an archaeology summer camp，which lasted ten
days．During the summer camp，we visited several museums which many valuable cultural relics were displayed．Even more excited，we got a chance to go to an archaeological site．It was the first time that we had been very close to ancient civilization that I could witness how the digging was carried out．The speeches were made by famous archaeologists informed us on much knowledge about this field．Besides，I make many friends who are interested in archaeology and we are still in constantly touch now，talking about how we like．

Answer 1

分析 今年夏天，我很幸運(yùn)地加入了考古夏令營，為期十天．活動中，我們參觀了很多博物館．更讓我們興奮的是我們得到了去考古遺址的機(jī)會．這是我們第一次如此近距離的目睹古代文明的發(fā)掘過程．一位有名的考古學(xué)家還告訴了我們很多考古領(lǐng)域的知識．此外，我還交了很多對考古感興趣的朋友，我們一直聯(lián)系，談?wù)撐覀兿矚g的東西．

解答 This summer，I was lucky to have joined∧an archaeology summer camp，which lasted ten
                                                           加in
days．During the summer camp，we visited several museums which many valuable cultural relics were displayed．
                                                                                         where
Even more excited，we got a chance to go to an archaeological site．
                exciting            the
It was the first time that we had been very close to ancient civilization that I could witness how the digging was carried out．
                                                       so
The speeches were made by famous archaeologists informed us on much knowledge about this field．
                    去掉                                                                 of
Besides，I make many friends who are interested in archaeology and we are still in constantly touch now，talking about how we like．
                 made                                                                                                constant                                          what
1．加in．join是表示加入某個組織，句意表達(dá)的是加入夏令營活動，要用join in．
2．which改為where．句中many valuable cultural relics were displayed是修飾museums的一個定語從句，從句結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要用關(guān)系副詞來引導(dǎo)．
3．excited改為exciting．句意表達(dá)是一件事，要用現(xiàn)在分詞修飾．過去分詞表達(dá)的是人的感受．
4．a(chǎn)改為the．句意表達(dá)的是特指．
5．very改為so． 句型搭配，so…that…如此…以致…
6．were去掉．句中made by famous archaeologists是修飾speeches的后置定語，不是句子．
7．on改為of．短語搭配，inform sb of sth告訴某人某事．
8．make改為made．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
9．constantly改為constant．句中是修飾名詞touch接觸，要用形容詞．
10．how改為what．句中we like是作介詞about的賓語從句，從句中l(wèi)ike缺少賓語，要用連接代詞．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．�？嫉闹�識點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．