Question

5．請(qǐng)寫一篇短文，闡述水在人們生活及工業(yè)中的重要性．
（1）沒(méi)有水，人與動(dòng)物怎么辦？
（2）缺水問(wèn)題越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重．原因是人口增長(zhǎng)；工、農(nóng)業(yè)發(fā)展；污染．
（3）應(yīng)采取措施，解決缺水問(wèn)題；充分利用；避免污染；凈化雨水或海水．
詞數(shù)：100左右
生詞：凈化purify；缺水water shortage；污染pollute；采取措施take measures
Lately，the importance of water and the water shortage problem have become a hot issue．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem（高分句型一）．開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，提出問(wèn)題
Water is very important to living things．Without water，there would be no life on earth．All animals and plants need water．Man also needs water．
Recently，as the population of the world is growing rapidly，using much water is a must．The development of agriculture and industry leads to water pollution．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention（高分句型二）．
As a saying goes，small actions make a big difference．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it（高分句型三）．First，raising the public awareness plays an important role in solving the problem．Besides，we should make good use of water and prevent water from being polluted．Meanwhile，we can purify rainwater and sea water（需要采取的措施）．
It's better late than never．Faced with the water problem，we should work together to protect our water resource and save every drop of water．發(fā)出倡議．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文，闡述水在人們生活中的重要性以及如何解決缺水問(wèn)題．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1、沒(méi)有水，人與動(dòng)物怎么辦？2、缺水問(wèn)題越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重．原因是人口增長(zhǎng)；工、農(nóng)業(yè)發(fā)展；污染．3、應(yīng)采取措施，解決缺水問(wèn)題；充分利用；避免污染；凈化雨水或海水．寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：hot issue（熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題）；pay attention to （注意）；lead to（導(dǎo)致）；be worth doing（值得做…）；take measures（采取措施）；play an important role（騎著重要作用）；make good use of （充分利用）
高分句型：1．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem．
                 在這個(gè)固定句型中，it作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的that從句．
                 2．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention．
                  how to solve such a serious problem 是一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句，作句子的主語(yǔ)．
                 3．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it．
                  It's high time that…句型，意為（是時(shí)候…），that從句用虛擬語(yǔ)氣"should+動(dòng)詞原形"．

解答 Lately，the importance of water and the water shortage problem have become a hot issue．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem（高分句型一）．開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，提出問(wèn)題
      Water is very important to living things．Without water，there would be no life on earth．All animals and plants need water．Man also needs water．
      Recently，as the population of the world is growing rapidly，using much water is a must．The development of agriculture and industry leads to water pollution．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention（高分句型二）．
       As a saying goes，small actions make a big difference．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it（高分句型三）．First，raising the public awareness plays an important role in solving the problem．Besides，we should make good use of water and prevent water from being polluted．Meanwhile，we can purify rainwater and sea water（需要采取的措施）．
      It's better late than never．Faced with the water problem，we should work together to protect our water resource and save every drop of water．發(fā)出倡議

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．