Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
THE LION AND THE MOUSE
When a lion was asleep, a little mouse began running up and down beside him, which made some noise. This soon wakened the lion. Losing his temper, he caught the mouse in his paws and was about to kill it. The mouse, terrified, pleaded to the lion to spare its life.
"Please let me go," it cried, "and one day I will repay you for your kindness." The idea of so small a creature ever being able to do anything for him amused the lion so much that he laughed aloud. He thought, “How could this little mouse help me?” However, he lifted his paws and let it go.
But the mouse's chance came after all. A few days later, when the lion was wandering in the forest, he was caught in a trap.
The hunters wanted to take him alive to the king, so he tied him to a tree, and went away to look for a wagon.
Just then the little mouse passed by, and saw the sad lion. It went up to him and soon gnawed away(啃斷) the ropes. “Was I right?” asked the little mouse. This lion nodded his head and thanked the little mouse.
【寫作要求】
以約30詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點；
2、以約120個詞就“勿以善小而不為”的主題發(fā)表看法，至少包含以下內(nèi)容要點：
（1）該故事給你什么啟示？
（2）你認(rèn)為生活中的小善舉能帶來大作用嗎？
（3）請舉例說明。
【寫作要求】
1、可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

A mouse made a lion angry because of waking him up. The mouse begged him for its life, promising to help him in return. Finally, the mouse did help the lion out of trouble.
After reading this story, I was lost in thought. I came to realize that people should never ignore the deed with small kindness. Your practicing of small good deeds sometimes will get big returns or make a great difference!
I fully agree that trivial things play an important part in our life. Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is, as we can see, a word of encouragement from a sincere teacher often change a downhearted student’s idea and behavior. Another example is that a warm smile to someone who loses courage and wants to commit suicide may comfort him, life him up and help him make it through the darkest night in his life. Furthermore, if you are traveling abroad, your picking up of a small piece of litter on a road can show the good habits and virtue of Chinese to the world!
In a word, it is the trivial things in daily life that count. Just as the famous saying goes, do not think any virtue trivial, and so neglect it; do not think any vice trivial, and so practice it.

試題分析：這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，“勿以善小而不為”。再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：（1）該故事給你什么啟示？ （2）你認(rèn)為生活中的小善舉能帶來大作用嗎？ （3）請舉例說明。這道題目要求比較嚴(yán)格，所以在寫作之前一定要看清題目。題目還要求1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己不會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
點評：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。對學(xué)生的概括能力要求很高，認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。