Question

【題目】The Siberian tiger is one of the most beautiful animal in the world.

It is also one of rarest.

Today only about 1,000 are left, some of them are in the Hunchun Nature Reserve.

The Chinese government has created the reserve to help saving the tiger’s natural habitat.

But the Siberian tiger is the only endangered species.

Other famous animal in a danger is the giant panda, whose habitat is in China.

The panda was the symbol of the World Wide Fund for Nature.

Thanks of scientists’ hard work, the number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】把a(bǔ)nimal改為animals

【2】加上the

【3】把them改為which

【4】把saving去掉save

【5】加上not

【6】把other改為another

【7】把was改為is

【8】把of改為to

【9】把lived改為living

【解析】

【1】把a(bǔ)nimal改為animals；第一句one of…，…之一，一般后面接可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故把a(bǔ)nimal改為animals

【2】加上the；第二句，形容詞的最高級前面要用定冠詞the，表示特指。這里rarest最稀少，是rare稀少的最高級。故要加上the

【3】把them改為which；第三句后半部分是which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。故把them改為which

【4】把saving去掉save；第四句help saving the tiger’s natural habitat中help的用法是help （to）do sth，幫助做某事。savethe tiger’s natural habitat拯救老虎的自然棲息地。故把saving去掉save。

【5】加上not；根據(jù)后文知道大熊貓也面臨危險，所以第五句But the Siberian tiger is the only endangered species. 應(yīng)該是說Siberian tiger不是唯一的瀕臨滅絕的物種。故要加上not。

【6】把other改為another；前面講述Siberian tiger瀕臨滅絕，所以這里第七句Other famous animal in a danger is the giant panda要講述的是另一種也面臨危險的動物——大熊貓。other其他的， another另一個。故把other改為another

【7】把was改為is；第七句The panda was the symbol of the World Wide Fund for Nature.

意思是：熊貓是世界自然基地的象征，這是一個一般性事實表述，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。故把was改為is

【8】把of改為to；第八句中thanks to 因為，由于。Thanks to scientists’ hard work因為科學(xué)家的努力工作。故把of改為to

【9】把lived改為living；第八句the number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590中，lived in the wild has increased to about用來修飾pandas，而熊貓與live之間是主動關(guān)系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞形式表示主動。故把lived改為living。