Question

7．假設(shè)你是Sunny，你的好友Sally是個(gè)性格外向、活潑開朗、不拘小節(jié)的女孩子，喜歡喝男孩子一起玩．而她的同桌卻和她的性格相反，常常因?yàn)橐恍┬∈潞退�生氣．她不知道該怎么辦，因此寫信向你求助．請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信．
注意：（1）回信中至少提出三條建議；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）詞數(shù)120左右．
Dear Sally，
It's very good that you want to make friends with the girl．In my opinion，you'd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two．（高分句型一）And I also think it's better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discussing some fashionable topics．（高分句型二）Besides，helping each other is also very important for both of you．Just share happiness and sadness with her．And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain that you will be good friends in future．（高分句型三）
Good luck to you．
Yours，
Sunny．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給你的好友Sally寫封回信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：：（1）回信中至少提出三條建議；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）詞數(shù)120左右．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：make friends with與…交朋友；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看；heart-to-heart 心貼心的；Besides另外； in time 及時(shí)；
In my opinion，you'd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two．（高分句型一）
And I also think it's better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discussing some fashionable topics．（高分句型二）
And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain that you will be good friends in future．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sally，
      It's very good that you want to make friends with the girl．In my opinion，you'd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two．（高分句型一）And I also think it's better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discussing some fashionable topics．（高分句型二）Besides，helping each other is also very important for both of you．Just share happiness and sadness with her．And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain that you will be good friends in future．（高分句型三）
      Good luck to you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Sunny

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．