Question

【題目】你的英國(guó)朋友Jim對(duì)你們學(xué)校的學(xué)生社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)非常感興趣。他來(lái)信希望你介紹這方面的有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.學(xué)校有哪些社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)；

2.你最喜歡哪一類活動(dòng)；

3.喜歡的原因。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng) extracurricular activity

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m happy to hear that you’re interested in the extracurricular activities organized by our school. Now, I’d like to give you more details.

A variety of activities have been organized, such as visiting Capital Museum, taking a field trip to Qufu, Shandong, home of Confucius, planting trees in Mangshan Park and learning to bake a cake in a pastry shop, just to name a few.

The activities mentioned above are quite popular with students. My favorite kind of activity is field trips. I went to Qufu in Senior One and Hangzhou in Senior Two. Both trips deeply impressed me. The reasons why I like field trips are as follows. First, field trips offer me a good chance to broaden my horizons. As the Chinese saying goes: “It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” Not only can I learn from locals and my own experiences, but also I can see with my own eyes our beautiful country and splendid culture. Second, field trips improve my research skills. Before we take field trips, we are always asked to prepare by searching online or in the library for useful information. Third, field trips help strengthen friendships. Since many of the field trips last several days, it is a good opportunity to bond with classmates better outside the classroom.

I really hope that you can go on a field trip with us in the future.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類寫(xiě)作。要求用英語(yǔ)給英國(guó)朋友Jim寫(xiě)一封回信。

這是一篇書(shū)信類作文。你的英國(guó)朋友Jim對(duì)你們學(xué)校的學(xué)生社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)非常感興趣。他來(lái)信希望你介紹這方面的有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)校有哪些社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)；2.你最喜歡哪一類活動(dòng)；3.喜歡的原因。我們所要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略，故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合整個(gè)文章，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。